tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post53409701199684447..comments2024-03-17T22:40:41.947-07:00Comments on The Social Porcupine: Chapter Three: The FriendsKeturah Lambhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-49356552080935599122021-11-02T05:13:38.805-07:002021-11-02T05:13:38.805-07:00I read Lewis a lot for this story, wanting to do h...I read Lewis a lot for this story, wanting to do him some justice. <br />I actually haven't read as much of Oscar Wilde as I should, certainly not enough to have any here. Though maybe more than I realize? Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-82481313382167405762021-10-19T00:28:11.015-07:002021-10-19T00:28:11.015-07:00————
But something about the moment fell short of...————<br /> But something about the moment fell short of her desires. This was everything she wanted—why did she still not feel whole? All she wanted was to enjoy the prime of her youth, but the harder she tried to love life, the faster it seemed to pass away toward the future.<br />————<br /><br />It's obvious you've drunk deeply of Lewis. He hits on this theme throughout his work. Perfectly phrased, not overplayed, just right. (And in this scene there's a fair bit of Wilde as well, right?)barrybrakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17778163052096094733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-45793423286983952442019-05-12T13:06:41.797-07:002019-05-12T13:06:41.797-07:00Thanks so much! It's one of those stories we a...Thanks so much! It's one of those stories we all dream of hearing more of, I think ;D Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-28527619181369457332019-05-12T07:45:37.636-07:002019-05-12T07:45:37.636-07:00This is so emotional....I've always wanted to ...This is so emotional....I've always wanted to hear Susan's side of the story so I love it.<br />M.H. Elrichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15566422567676787981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-60191558094034224092019-05-09T13:42:07.360-07:002019-05-09T13:42:07.360-07:00Hahaha! Don't blame you for thinking that ;) T...Hahaha! Don't blame you for thinking that ;) Thanks! Next chapter should hopefully be a bit more exciting ;) Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-71603407121475411042019-05-09T13:41:16.689-07:002019-05-09T13:41:16.689-07:00THANKS!! Really needed to hear that today ;0 THANKS!! Really needed to hear that today ;0 Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-89622289318436416472019-05-09T13:22:15.643-07:002019-05-09T13:22:15.643-07:00As I read this all I'm thinking is "Susan...As I read this all I'm thinking is "Susan, stop being a chump and go play with your siblings". xD Great chapter, Keturah! Can't wait for the next one!<br /><br />theonesthatreallymatter.blogspot.comEmily Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04448841898022668078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-86673725025974564112019-05-09T12:29:00.573-07:002019-05-09T12:29:00.573-07:00I really enjoy your writing style!I really enjoy your writing style!Skye Hofferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02385765274513034927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-91109650284851976252019-05-06T17:48:05.830-07:002019-05-06T17:48:05.830-07:00Yeah, I don't like her friends either, so that...Yeah, I don't like her friends either, so that's good! Thanks! Glad you're finding it interesting ;D Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-34801459783345425112019-05-06T17:47:08.352-07:002019-05-06T17:47:08.352-07:00Oooohhh, thanks so much! I don't cry, but I...Oooohhh, thanks so much! I don't cry, but I'm almost ready to now ;0 And yay! I love this mirror of mine ;) Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-77949731494593403132019-05-06T17:45:21.043-07:002019-05-06T17:45:21.043-07:00I know, I just want her to remember too, and I'...I know, I just want her to remember too, and I'm the one that had to write this!!!! Thanks ... glad you like the mirror ;d Keturah Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05041749245034077912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-75017254890973016762019-05-06T11:35:07.729-07:002019-05-06T11:35:07.729-07:00I really don't like any of here friends. They ...I really don't like any of here friends. They fit excellently in the story though. The mirror is very interesting! <br /><br />astorydetective.blogspot.com Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-574727717661448032019-05-06T09:04:12.560-07:002019-05-06T09:04:12.560-07:00Keturah, I just can’t get over the fact that you N...Keturah, I just can’t get over the fact that you NAIL all these characters! I’m really intrigued by the mirror now . . .Nicole Dusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11632214867395523015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2538625224020600073.post-16944358891069824662019-05-06T07:25:25.245-07:002019-05-06T07:25:25.245-07:00Oh, I feel so sorry for Susan! If only she would r...Oh, I feel so sorry for Susan! If only she would remember Narnia and know that it is real! Good chapter, I'm really interested to know why she saw Lucy in the mirror.Chloe the MovieCritichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02200752624092560917noreply@blogger.com